It was only in the halls of M.S.S. (my school) that were scary because of the monsters that would come out of the walls on each side.
One day I was putting my math homework in my backpack, and the monster jumped out at me. "Aaah!" I screamed. I let go off all my math homework. The papers flew all around. I ran and ran. There seemed to be no path to the classroom, so I ran to the bathroom and closed all the doors. I went into the smallest bathroom before he saw me. I stood on the toilet, so he would not see me. He flung open the smallest bathroom door, but before he could see me I crawled into the next bathroom toward the right. I kept doing the same until I could not hide. The monster walked in. I thought I was traped. I rubbed my eyes. It was just C.W. - my classmate. She said "You scared me. I thought you were a monster." I said "I did too." We walked back to the classroom to do our work.
5/12/2009
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I hope you do not have that many monsters at your school, otherwise you have no way to hide. Very thoughtful, funny story.
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Nice work, SAPP! Keep you imagination live. Maybe you can write about you little sister C. She will sure bring sparkles to your writing.
ReplyDeleteNext time, tell us exactly what monster looks like, how big is the head and what's the color of the eyes. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat twist at the end. You can give a little more details describing the monster so it appears spooky.
ReplyDeleteI love this story! It's very creative! And my
ReplyDeleteinitials is C.w. too!
-Crystal Wang
Hiya! Crystal, My last name is Wang! Are you Chinese?
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