Once upon a time, a girl named Megan did not do her homework. She was at Orlando and stayed in a hotel there. A tiny little Mickey Mouse came under the door. He said "Weird things will happen to you." He got into the refrigerator and got into the milk carton. Megan looked for the mouse but he disappeared.
Then, milk started coming out, more and more came out. She swam to a mermaid, and asked her for help. The mermaid said "There is a wizard that can help you." She swam for two days and one night. She found the wizard. Megan said "Why did the mouse do that?" The wizard said "To teach you a lesson." "How is that teaching a lesson?" Megan asked. "You did not do your homework" said the wizard. Next, the wizard gave her a jewel. She said "Smile to the jewel and everything will be normal again." Megan smiled to the jewel, and swam back. On her way back the milk was getting shallower and shallower. By the end, she saw there was no use of swimming, because she could reach the bottom of the pool of milk. When she got back she put new clothes on and always did her homework and schoolwork.
1/21/2009
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Keep going, little girl! Your writing is so impressive, I am sure your parents are very proud of you!
ReplyDeleteWow, It is amaze imagination of swiming in the the pool of milk and meeting a wizard. How dose this magic story come out from your little brain. It is great. I realy want your share your story writing experience with me.
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Angie: I really like it! It is so impressive and creative and I really like your stories inculding this one. Keep up your extrodinary writing and thinking!
ReplyDeleteSincerely Joyce
I really like how you use dialogue in your story, Angie!
ReplyDeleteVery creative, great fantasy story!
ReplyDeleteWOW! This is a great story! You are very creative! can you teach me how to write good fantasy stories? <:3)~ it's a mouse!
ReplyDelete-Crystal :-)
i love it!!!!!!!
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